The first Writing in Stereo
The original Writing in Stereo was published online back in the late 1980's.
Its purpose was to apply creative radio dramatics to all aspects of the teaching of high school English. Each lesson included a procedure and example. I'm sharing these with you here.
UNIT OBJECTIVE: (I) The student will write four (4) original narratives and dramatize each for radio.
LESSON OBJECTIVE: (A) The student will recognize examples of characteristics of radio drama (listed) and demonstrate that recognition in a quiz.
1. Script format
2. Dialogue's Role a. Voice characterization b. Planting c. Tagging d. Effort e. Off-mike
3. Sound Effects
5. Music Bridge
MATERIALS REQUIRED: Audio tape recorder/player, audio recordings of radio dramatic programs, transparency and photocopies of the figure provided ("Radio Dramatics")
INTRODUCTION: Back in the years B.T.--Before Television--the radio gave us much more than music, news, and sports. Radio also provided us all the dramatic programming we're so used to seeing each evening on television today. Radio dramatic programs could be produced for a fraction of the cost of a television show. They needed no costumes, no scenery, and no lighting. Actors didn't even have to memorize their lines; they could read them from the script. The microphone was also blind to race, sex, even species of actor. (A creative performer can play a talking turnip, if he or she can create an imaginative voice characterization.)
1. Place a transparency of the elements of radio dramatics on the overhead, and begin describing those listed. Use a second transparency for the characteristics of the script format.
2. Play an example of a radio dramatic program.
3. Identify examples of the characteristics above. You can do so by pointing to the item on the overhead or stopping the tape to discuss them.
4. Give the quiz prepared for this lesson. It contains written examples or descriptions of each of the characteristics for students to identify.
EVALUATION FOCUS: Students should earn a passing mark on the quiz.
1. The radio dramatic scripting format I've chosen for this program may be familiar. I've selected the simplest for teaching the course. Here's a sample:
(MUSIC UP AND UNDER)
(SOUND: FOOTSTEPS ON STAIR)
PAPA BEAR: Boy, am I hungry! Hungry as a bear. Where's the little woman? Where's my breakfast? Aw, there she is!
MOMMA BEAR: Here I am, Papa, and here's your breakfast.
PAPA BEAR: Oh, boy! Let me at it! (SOUND OF SLURPING ... SPITTING) Owweee! I'm burned! I'm burned!
MOMMA BEAR: Oh is it too hot, Dear?
PAPA BEAR: (BARELY UNDER CONTROL) Too hot ... yes, Dear. Maybe we should go out for a little walk while it cools down.
MOMMA BEAR: Finally, we're getting out of the house. I'll get my hat. There. How do I look?
PAPA BEAR: Just lovely, Pet. After you. Come along, Junior.
(SOUND OF DOOR OPENING AND CLOSING, FOOTSTEPS)
(MUSIC UP AND OUT)
In the format I've chosen, character names are capitalized, dialogue follows the usual mix of capitals and lower case letters. Sound effects, music cues and descriptions of action are in parenthesis. I underline the SOUND effects cues to make them easier to spot.
2. Dialogue is the most important aspect of radio dramatics. It describes everything the audience cannot see. Since the audience sees nothing, the dialogue describes everything. It describes characters ... by their own speech and actions and by other characters' descriptions of them. Voice characterization is the unique sound of the character's voice. An old man sounds like an old man. A child's voice is higher pitched, immature.
In the sample scene from The Three Bears, characters spend a lot of time talking about the things they're doing at the moment. "Where's the little woman?" "There she is." "Here I am, Papa, and here's your breakfast." "Let me at it!" "I'm burned! I'm burned!" "I'll get my hat. There. How do I look?" "Just lovely, Pet. After you." Perhaps the major reason we think of radio drama as a very "talky" medium is this necessity for what we call the plant. (The term "plant" has a variety of meanings. In some script writing, it refers to any piece of preparatory exposition--something necessary to the resolution of the conflict. In radio, the term means generally any reference to unseen objects or actions.) Typical are such words as "Here," or "There," indicating an action taking place at that instant. A more melodramatic example would be a line like, "He's got a gun!"
If there is one unique characteristic of radio dramatic writing, the plant must be that attribute. Your students will be tempted to sprinkle their dramas with narration. As a demonstration of planting's importance, I generally begin by disallowing any narrating. Once students get into the planting habit, they feel less compelled to allow an omnipotent voice to interrupt the flow of the plot. I tell my students, "We're writing radio drama, not storytelling."
Tagging is another concession to the limitations of this invisible theater ... and another trait associated with its old fashionedness. Tagging is the frequent use of characters' names in the dialogue. So Momma Bear says, "Here I am, Papa." Characters sprinkle their dialogue with name tags for the other characters. That way we know who is present and who is talking to whom. This rule is harder for students to remember than the more obvious and plainly necessary planting.
When characters exert effort, they show it in their speech. When a character is trapped in the wreckage of a car, he says,
"I can't get my leg free!" As he says the plant line, he suggests he's trying to get it free at that very moment by showing the effort in his voice. Generally, this means adding some well-placed grunting.
We can convince listeners someone is across the room without walking away from the microphone. We use a simple strategy we call "off-mike." The actor simply leans away or to the side of the microphone to sound fifteen to thirty feet away. Moving away or toward the mike as we speak gives the impression of someone leaving or closing toward the place where the other characters are "standing." (Experiment with your equipment to get the best results.)
3. Sound effects are another misunderstood aspect of radio dramatics. They are far less necessary than most novices realize. Sound effects are said to "support" plants. It's not enough to hear a crashing sound. A character must say, "He's going to throw that chair!" Then we hear the crashing sound. Your students can do whole plays without complicated sound effects. Experiment with simplicity. Most effects can be the simple mechanical variety handled at the microphone. Recorded effects are more complicated. Learn by doing.
4. Every space has its own ambience. You sing in the shower because the shower echos a little like--but not exactly like--a concert hall. The sound of the human voice has a different presence in an office from that in a city bus. When my students imagined a mini traffic helicopter reporting on congestion in the school hallways, they recorded and repeated the middle of a sound effect of a passing helicopter. Then they decided to make their onboard dialogue suggest they were yelling to be heard over the engine noise. So they sat back two or three feet from the micronphones and shouted their dialogue. The results of this can be heard in our "Anthology" recording on the Archives page.
5. In the movies and television, music is heard all the time. It sets the mood, builds suspense, even comments on the action. Radio uses music more sparingly. We have what we call the "music bridge." The music bridge does what the dissolve performs in the camera media. It tells the listener the next scene is later or somewhere else. The music comes up with the end of one scene and fades under with the beginning of the next. In the simplest of technical arrangements you'll need another recorder or player to add these to your classroom productions. An audio mixer is recommended.
Doug Potter is a retired high school teacher. During his 30-year teaching career, he taught drama, English, writing, broadcast journalism and radio and video production. His proudest achievement is Pueblo Magnet High School's KWXL-LP, one of only two FCC-licensed low power FM radio stations in Tucson, Arizona.
Doug earned his bachelor's degree in radio/TV at Arizona State University and his masters in drama at the University of Arizona. He's been shooting and editing film and video since 1968. Drawing on years of research and teaching experience, Doug developed the Writing in Stereo program and the MicWriter (“mike writer”) broadcast news writing model for use in his radio broadcast journalism classes.